“The/ Feeling felt like denser snow…”: Narrative Poetry

Our class began with a discussion of food and memory in preparation for studying Gary Soto’s Narrative-Style poem, Oranges. Nostalgia and feelings came up frequently in our discussions. What emotions are attached to memory and food? Why? Do memories change as time goes by? How? Below are some examples of students’ work.

Lesson Note:  This session included a student group performance/ Poet’s Theater presentation of the poem. Here, the young writers are asked to improvise, collaborate, utilize props, and present a performance to their peers quickly. To ‘physicalize’ the poem quickly, removes the ‘inner editor’ and place the poem inside the body via muscle memory. It also allows a myriad of options for the poem’s interpretation.  At the end of the residency, ‘Oranges’ is usually the poem that is remembered most.

Rice 

By Cecilia R.

From Japan, to Hawaii, to Mexico

These places all have rice

Dinner, dessert, breakfast,

The memories of eating this multi-flavor food

Desserts like Arroz Con Leche

Rice with veggies for breakfast

Rice with tacos

This reminds me of my culture

My ears hearing my mom pouring rice into the pan

I know what that means 

The cylinder shape filling up the plate 

I’m excited to eat

The smells of garlic, onions, and vegetables fill the air and make my nose tingle

Making me feel even more hungry

Feeling the touch of the grains fly across my mouth

This is home 

french fries

By Austin H.

As I walked into my nearest restaurant 

I smelt the nice aroma of the delicious 

dishes around me. I went to go sit down

the waiter asked me, “What would you like

to order?” I said. “l would like to order french

fries.” when she served it to me, I just felt 

like I wanted to dive right in the warm, savory

french fries, people outside saw the french fries

and must’ve probably thought the french fries

we’re a lit-up plate.

Ms. Wright, 7th Grade

 Ice Cream from the Past

By Wenxi C.

I can still remember that Sunday afternoon

The sweet taste of that vanilla ice cream 

It was a treat 

Playing in that playplace

The distinct smell of sweat and kids 

Always a few stray nuggets scattered around 

I was always excited when my mom ordered the vanilla ice cream 

When I got it, I immediately got to work

Licking, savoring that soft texture and sweet taste

Cold, refreshing in the hot summer heat

The cone always crunchy when bit

It was a sign that my reward was almost gone

After I finished, we went back to our house

I slept, thinking about vanilla ice cream

Wishing that I could have one more small taste

Ice Cream

By Kenny H.

Ice cream is so good during the summer

That it can make you smell flavored snow.

It was a day during the summer, and there would

Be an ice cream truck coming down the street

Almost every single day. One day, when 

I was at home when I heard an ice cream truck coming.

I went to my mom and asked her to buy ice cream

Specifically vanilla flavor out of the 

Many different types, and I was too scared

To go outside and buy it alone and talk to the person.

I tasted the ice cream when she came back, and it 

Tasted wonderful, delicious, and cold. The

Feeling felt like denser snow

With some sauce mixed with it. It also

Looked like snow with some tiny lines

Indent in it. It Cooled my body down 

From the heat of the sun. When you 

Touch it with your warm hands, it

Melts just like snow. Snow reminds

Me of vanilla flavored ice cream.

Maybe ice cream has a reason to exist,

To cool us all down from the coolness of the 

Ice cream.

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