Magical Metaphors/ Library Poems @ Avondale Logandale

In week eight of poetry class, we had fun reading a poem about a magical library tour. We talked about writing multiple stanzas and using metaphors (comparisons without the use of “like” or “as”) in our writing before brainstorming our own original magical library poems.

Each week there will be 3 poems from each class published to our Hands on Stanzas blog, and every student will have an opportunity to see their written work published on our blog in the weeks to come.

Scroll down to enjoy our published magical library poems!

 

 

 Ms. Lozada
4th Grade

 

Library
JanLexis R.

This book teleports.
This book is a portal.
This book turns into an animal.
This book talks.

This book reads secret messages.
This book has powers.
This book flies.
This book turns into a street.

This book takes us to the past.
This book bounces.
This book leads you to dinosaurs.
This book spawns items.
This book has a lot of Legos.

 

 

Library
Salvador A.

This book is bleeding.
This book has a unicorn.
This book is made of chocolate.
This book has water magic powers.

This book has my friend in it.
This book has magic kitties that fly.
This book has marshmallows.
This book is made of gingerbread.

This book is made of ninjas.
This book has Pokémon.
This book is made of everything.

 

 

Library
Isaly R.

This book is made of crayons.
This book is colorful
This book is made of gold
This book tastes like pasta

This book is an ocean
This book is pink
This book is a person
This book is sharp

This book is YouTube
This book is Netflix
This book is Toca Boca
This book is puppies

This book is Roblox
This book is a vacation
This book is on fire

This book is Tik Tok
This book is basketball
This book is music
This book is unicorns

This book is fluffy
This book is a pillow

 

Ms. Miller
3rd Grade

 

Library
Annalis N.

This book is as scary as a flying clown.
This book is like a puppet talking by itself.
This book is horrifying.

This book is a puppet that can do whatever it wants to do.
This book has different kinds of living animals.

 

 

Library
Angeliz G.

This book is a cloud floating in the air.
This book has little unicorns.
This book is a wizard that does magical spells.
This book is Pikachu.

This book can cure you.
This book is a rainbow.
This book is a sunset.
This book is stars.

This book is a dog.
This book is a rabbit.
This book helps poor people.
This book is a rose.
This book brings people to life.

 

 

Library
Yelitza R.

This book is full of wizards.
This book holds the world.
This book makes Disney, Pixar, and Dreamworks things come to life.
This book holds life.

This goes deep in your soul.
This book made dinosaurs come to life.
This book is kindness.
This book makes me go across the world.

This book gives you free food.
This book holds friendship.
This book is going to change the world.

 

Ms. Afzal
3rd Grade

 

Library
Brandon C.

This book is ugly.
This book is amazing.
This book can see you.
This book will save your life.

This book has magic words.
This book has everything to know.
This book is super funny.
This book has all the toys in the world.

This book has secrets.
This book has secrets to know in Fortnite.
This book is a liars edition.
This book will save the world.

 

 

Library
Leslie M.

This book took me to a world.
This book is a fairy tale.
This book is old.
This book is cold.

This book is true.
This book is long.
This book is short.
This book has so many letters.

This book is magical.
This book is funny.
This book is filled with pop.
This book has stickers.

 

 

Library
Eduardo H.

This book smells like peanuts.
This book is real.
This book is scary.
This book is a tree.

This book is animals.
This book is boring.
This book changed my life.

 

Ms. Pease
3rd Grade

 

 

Library
Keyla V.

This book is special.
This book is bad.
This book is cheery.
This book is money.

This book is weird.
This book is Thor.
This book is cats.

This book is dead.
This book is not good.
This book is Goose Bumps.

 

 

Library
Joshua B.

This book is a snail.
This book changed the world.
This book changed my dog.
This book saved my cat.

This book is a cherry.
This book is a turtle.
This book is a maniac!
This book died.

This book is a horse.
This book is a zebra.
This book has lots of turtles.
This book is an apple.

 

 

Library
Jermonie R.

This book is cray-cray.
This book saved my life.
This book is cool.
This book is lame.
This book none other than Diary of Wimpy Kid.

This book heals wounds.
This book is XD.
This book is stupendous.
This book is a bottle of water.

This book is a clown.
This book is Fortnite.
This book is whoooo I forgot.
This book is like broken glass.

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