“Lemon/Lime by itself” Odes to the Unusual

This week we read “Ode to my socks” by Pablo Neruda. Students thought about the things they love and were challenged to write an ode to the most unusual. The below poems are a sample of the unexpected passions of Waters 6th and 7th graders, including Crystals, Birds, and Lemon/Lime by itself. Please enjoy!

Ms. Smallwood
6th Grade 

Ode to the Animals

Jake K.

If I could, I would feed

all the Animals,

deserving of food

of course

If not they would

become chow

for the others,

They’re the

source.

The lion is the King,

but he would taste

real nice,

to the zebra of

the plains,

with a side of rice.

Ode to the game

Baxter W.

As I look at the screen, press a few buttons,

He moves. He swings, he hits, I choose, what to do.

Will I fight one, three, or none. Will I beat the game,

or run from fame. As the game of my childhood

continues, I get better, As the game of my adulthood

continues, I get stronger

Ode to My Crystals

Sophia T.

My grandma got me

a box of crystals

for Christmas

some were rolled

some were raw

The raw ones were rough

The smooth ones were smooth

I didn’t only get a box of crystals

I also got a rose quartz necklace

and a crystal pendulum

the pendulum caught my eye,

“What’s this?” I ask my grandma

while holding up the pendulum

“A pendulum,” she says.

Ms. Hernandez 

7th Grade

Ode to Lemon and Lime by itself

Reeve S.

I like lemon and Lime, on its own.

It is sour, yellow or green, bumpy

It smells good. I like it because

it’s sour, and I like sour. Some

people don’t like sour, so they

don’t like lemon and limes. I eat

lemons/limes at restaurants when a

lime/lemon comes with my

food or one of my family’s.

Ode to the smell of gasoline

Yusuf S.

The majestic smell,

as we stop the car when the tank is empty

the fluids rush into the car.

The saltiness, the sweetness, like a hug from the sun.

As we leave and the smell slowly fades away,

I wish we could stay just one more day.

Ode to birds

Darcy A.

Ode to birds all

sent from the heavens

large and small

angelic wings to let them fly

let them soar high in the sky

hollow bones filled with air

covered in feathers

instead of hair

descended from dinosaurs

they continue their legacy

and some with webbed feet

gained access tot he sea

dive far under to catch fish

Just to touch you

is what I wish

powerful beaks for every use

everywhere when set loose

Oh ode to birds

ode to birds all

sent from the heavens’

Glory never to fall

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