“Language — Conversation — All poetry” Editing Poems with Dulles

During our 4th week at Dulles, we read an erasure poem from Austin Kleon’s “Newspaper Blackout” to start a conversation about editing our work and how to recycle pieces of poetry to make something new. On Tuesday, we tried our hand at some erasures, and on Thursday, we reflected back on the poems we wrote the past month and had some time to finish them. Enjoy!

Mr. Bridges’ Poetry Specials

Grades 4-6

 

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By Anastasia R.

 

game

can

start

a

technique

around

by

existed

 

There’s

a

American

2018 blogpost. “Crossouts,”

documents

best-known

Other authors

such as

Jaime Mortara

ending up

 

spotlighting.

 

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By Delonte W.

 

language       conversation

all        poetry

 

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By Jeremiah G.

 

game

poetry

starts from

a new

technique

around

borrowing words

before poems were ever written

 

There’s no    way to create an

pre-existing text

 

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By Anastasia R.

 

game,    justice,

all

starts from an

type of

“instagrammable”

words and ideas

poem

 

to create an      “rule”

must be                        written as

six different kinds of

sections of newspaper articles or

 

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By Santana P.

 

I have collected myself o late — through the enjoyment

of harmless pleasure —

 

the expansion of one person– the magnification of one

 

Gilbert is in good company on this point. If you’ve

 

body and soul — a pleasure generated in the deep attentive-

ness to place, history, tradition, ideas, and beauty.

 

Jeremiah Graves the Best Fighter

By Jeremiah G.

 

He was a good fighter

and he was the best cryer.

 

Untitled

By Takiera D.

 

My school has 3 floors

a whole bunch of windows

the school kitchen has a lot of

supplies

 

The Poem Mixture

By Maliyah V.

 

My sister and I

driving by.

 

A bright white haired

person, walking on the side walk

that was close by.

 

The loud music of her

favorite artist Drake

 

The hot taste of

Wendy’s making my mouth

flutter in delight

 

The plain green leafs

growing from the ground

beneath.

 

Untitled

By Brian F.

 

the outside of

my house has windows

and bricks

 

my kitchen has a stove

a trashcan a dishwasher

and an oven

 

Poem and Drawing

By Dixxandri

 

la itoria comiesa yo conosinueb a

migoise       i seconbitioen le

i adiounaumo i sedigeron

 

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