Part two of metaphors included using layers of meaning in them for Dever 7th graders. Below are pieces students created about metaphors in their own life.
Sus
By Luca M.
Sal is a ball of fun,
but us sassy and makes me want to run,
Adam is a stinky gas,
always me wanna pass
Wes is a athletic pig
and always wants to dig Izzy is a very cool man
Would love to drive a van.
Loss=Win
Diego L.
I lose a lot
Sometimes I’ll loose in fortunate
and give the sea salt.
sometimes I’ll ask my crush if they can put their Minecraft bed next to theirs and they’ll start roasting me like KFC.
All these losses keep me up at night
All the doubt without benefits
But in reality losses can be wins. Every loss comes with a lesson
And every lesson is a win
Therefore losses are wins.
Snow Cage
Noelani C.
Nature is a blizzard cruel and relentless
The confusion was a foggy mist, blocking something
The deep white smooth snow was a cold hell,
having more deeper and deeper rings as you continue.
Snowballs being through at you were personal insults,
constantly being bombarded by them considering the unlikeable hypocritical maniputliatives person you are.
You deserve this absolute downshow of hell
yet God finds mercy within you
although once you die
you’ll most certainly be sent downward
it’ll be better than what you have faced alive.
