Science! Industry! Haiku!

Lawndale’s poets were not in the classroom for our usual Monday workshops this week. Instead, they were visiting the Museum of Science and Industry for a field trip! And what better way to encapsulate a trip than with a haiku?! No better way. Together (on Wednesday) we discussed where haikus come from (Japan), how they’re structured (5-7-5 baby!), and why the little moments matter. We looked at seminal (Matsuo Bashō) and contemporary (Jacqueline Woodson) haikus, and the poets went to work. Mazes, Christmas trees, and space missions made a real impression. But not everyone went on this field trip, so what about them? Some students reflected on other museums they’ve visited, and others simply on not going. Get ready for some wonderful poetry and a little 5-7-5 mastery sprinkled into the mix.

Ms. Barker

6th Grade

[We went in the mirror]

by Tywon M.

We went in the mirror

maze we got lost but we had

an amazing time.

[Click! Pose for pictures]

by Aryian M.

Click! Pose for pictures.

Blinding and dazzling at me.

Different lights shine.

Poem

by Tabia W.

Portraits are stunning

Artwork hangs on ev’ry wall

Looking at old work

No Fui

by Jhongleis P.

pues no fui
pero creo que la fuera
pasado bien aburrida
pero bueno todo
pasa por algo
y pues, ajam

Ms. Barker

8th Grade

Space and Earth

by Geane C.

Astronauts and cars

outerspace and going far

big miles and spaceships

Tree

by Anonymous

The tree was so big

The tree lights were beautiful

I felt very small

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