Pandora's Box Poems
Submitted by Larry Dean on January 16, 2009 - 1:14am.
For our first class back after the winter break and new year, we read Fons, by Pura López-Colomé, briefly discussing the poem's language, images, and use of mythology, especially the myth of Pandora's Box. Students then drew folded pieces of paper out of a box I had brought to class, writing down the single sentence on each piece of paper at the top of their page set aside for the day's writing; this was to be the title, and inspiration for their poem. (Sentences were taken from famous first and last lines from a variety of movies.) Then, with each classroom teacher's help, another piece of paper was drawn from a separate box, providing limitations for the students' work. Those limitations are noted after teacher names, below.
Many excellent and surprising poems were written by students! Some of the best are below.

Mrs. Jones, 3rd Grade (4 stanzas + 4 or less words per line)
The Sun Is Breaking Through Kate B.
The sun is going through me.
It is so bright it hurts my eyes.
I go outside in my shorts. I see my friend.
I say hi he says bye.
This Is My Neighborhood Vicky C.
The neighborhood is boring I have no dog I have no parrot
I have a flower It is so boring It dies each year
It does not play It's not a pet
My neighborhood is boring
I Hurried Home Leanna H.
I hurried home.
I ran very fast.
I ran back again.
I try and try.
A New Home, A New School Vincente H.
A whole new place you don't know anyone.
You feel lonely and sad it's like nobody knows you exist in
this world. People go past you like you
are invisible. You feel like there is no one that knows you want someone to know you exist.
Everybody Comes Here Samantha P.
Everybody comes to me, The light the sun, Then when I'm done, I'll share my story, I was a glory,
The theme is high, up in the sky, the show is on, by dawn, everybody comes to me now I'm done
by the moon, and sun,
the light, the dark, I see a mark
You'll Probably See Me Next Week Devon R.
I said goodbye, but you said stay.
You got turned in because of the FBI.
You annoyed me, you embarrassed me.
Leave me alone, just let me be.
Looks Like a Nice Morning Ihsan S.
It's a warm sunny day, the birds chirp silently.
The kids are jumping, playing, and laying under the green trees.
Squirrels are running around having the time of their lives.
The thing I can do is relax outside.
I Never Knew Nina Y.
I never knew I never knew
I never knew the answer
I never knew I never knew
I never knew the answer oh, I never knew
You Look at That River Gently Flowing by Natalie Z.
Just looking at water. The one that has a reflection
Gently flowing by with lots of fish
With the winter wind blowing it slowly and freezing it with snow
The river can splash a swirl when it changes its reflection slowly
Mr. Sandlass, 4th Grade (5 stanzas + 3 or less words per line)
I Wonder Where We'll End up? Michelle A.
I wonder where we'll end up? In the future
will we have flying cars or
trampolines for transportation, or a new kind of food to eat!
Will we have an Ice Age?
So do you have an idea where we will be? Or a different thought, so.... good-bye. Now I need a hot dog!
You Want to Know Something Allison C.
You want to know something
it's not a secret just say
yes, no, maybe so I don't care anyway
you want to know something really I'll tell you
I won't joke around but maybe I'll play
What Do We Do Now? Nicole C.
What do we do now, when it's winter and people are dying every second of every day. What
do we do now when there's a tornado and you have no shelter.
These things happen every minute of every day. So we
need to know what we do now. And when
things happen and how.
You Can't Shake It Out of Your Heart Jacob E.
You can't hate but you can love.
It could not love. It can only hate.
We can love but we can't hate.
Love is unstoppable but hate is stoppable.
Love is grateful.
You Can Go Now Aleena I.
Leave get out bye-bye.
I own this place it's mine get out.
We're through so long farewell
run, leave see you later, adiós
salut tschüss, ciao. You can go.
It's Quiet Sophie L.
It's quiet.
Like the morning sun before it comes. The birds are still sleeping. Sleeping until the rooster wakes them up.
Now night falls still quiet.
The night animals come out, come out as if it is their shift.
Morning come back. Still quiet.
We're Sorry We Were Late Sergio N.
I'm sorry I was late for class. I'm sorry I was late for dinner.
I'm sorry we were late for school.
I'm sorry for being late for the dance.
I'm sorry I was late for the movie.
I'm sorry for being late at everything.
My Mind Was Hanging Outside the Window Divya P.
Snow why
Blizzard why
Why can't I play outside
Cold why
I said while my mind was hanging outside the window
I Saw Her Daniel S.
I saw her, she's beautiful, her eyes shine like stars.
Looking at her her perfume entering my nose, I dream of her.
When I look at her, I trip over my own feet.
She's an angel sent from heaven
to bring me eternal happiness.
It's Not As Easy Angela Y.
It's not as easy to live a full life.
As it's not easy to forget horrible memories now...
it gets easier and easier to live if you try hard enough
but it's not as easy to live with problems everywhere everywhere...
but now it's easy to write this poem.
Mrs. Goode, 5th Grade (6 stanzas + 3 to 6 words per line)
He Learned Too Late Kayla H.
Why didn't he before he needed to know it today.
He learned too late. What happened to him he just skipped it.
I've been waiting to study with him. He came too late.
He learned too late he said to me. He said he doesn't care anymore.
Why didn't he learn, I just don't know, he just said.
I didn't care he said again just leave me alone please said him.
This Is a Story of Long, Long Ago Klea K.
Long, long ago, someone was looking. Looking everywhere. What he saw? He saw everything. Where he saw things? Everywhere. Again I say. From the mountain tops, to the valleys. From the towers, to the tunnels. Impossible! You might say.
Resistant to everything. But not electricity. Thomas Edison knew. He knew what he was doing. He wanted to kill jumper. Thomas Edison didn't make electricity to be an inventor or try something new. He wanted to kill jumper.
Well now you know. Said the Grandpa to his child. I want to know more!
I can't tell you any more, that's all I am allowed to tell you. I will not lie to you. I will die if I go any further.
"But why?" Because...Five seconds of silence occurred. Because I am jumper.
No more conversation. No more questions. No more answers. That's when the only jumper left in the world died.
They're Here Already Anastasia K.
They're here already. They are coming to get us. We have to hide fast. I am squished in my closet.
I should've never said her name in the mirror 5 times. OMG she is here she is gonna kill me.
I am so scared. I run outside for help. No one is outside. She is looking for me in the house.
I run by Solomon School I tried to get in but it was locked.
I hear her in the house I start crying. Again I scream for help.
She got me. People look at my grave.
We Cannot Keep This a Secret Any Longer Sherine M.
It's my identity that needs to be revealed, show my self to the world, to reveal who I am.
This secret I cannot keep any longer, it's disturbing, it's hurtful, but it is who I am.
I don't know what to do, it's hard, to think about it makes me mad, sad, but hopeful.
To be who I am will be scary to you but it will make me lonely and sad.
I have to do it but when? Where? Where and how?
To see who I am, why am I who I am. This is me, I am a ghost.
At 3 P.M. On This Particular Day Isis M.
At 3 p.m. on this day I was doing my homework at home with my friend.
Later at 3:30 p.m. I was on the phone with my best friend.
It was 4 p.m. I was on the computer on this website called Fun Brain.
I was very sleepy 5 p.m. I had to go take a shower it was not really fun.
It was 8:30 p.m. I was watching TV. I was watching what I really like.
It was 10 p.m. I was going to sleep and I wanted to talk to mom but my mom was sleeping I didn't want to wake her up.
It's Peaceful Joseph M.
You snap in the peaceful air. The peaceful air you breathe in. peaceful grass in the summer.
The white shivering snow. Peaceful skies with the watery clouds.
Peaceful people walking around. The leaves fall and crunch. Peaceful smell flying through the air.
Plants are peaceful full of water.
Peaceful snowman built all the air.
It's peaceful air full of fun.
A Bee Should Be Able to Fly Khang N.
Maybe not...it's too fat to be carried too small to be up and not aware of the surroundings.
It can make honey spike your dog and have no minds. Nothing it can like they are miserable at playing sports and are not cool
thy have rude attitudes don't care, don't talk have no feelings.
They complain about. They quarrel a lot. And aren't skilled at doing work.
Or so as humans think...but they insult the bee, without any care for what they think about you.
But they don't care what you think, they just do what they want.
I Sometimes Catch Myself Looking up at the Moon Toni S.
I stare up. It shines and glitters an amazing object.
So inspiring I have so many wonders. It has this special thing. A look like something I've never seen.
The moon trembles the view is extraordinary from Earth my friend and I see the importance of this object.
I'm in the car. I catch myself staring up if you talk to me I don't hear.
I keep thinking that the moon is moving but it's not, that is how strong the view is.
Everybody should see something this big so beautiful and so helpful.
It Was My Favorite Year... Sam S.
It was my favorite year when I hit the gas station with the bag of leaves. The baseball hit the football in the sauna. All the kids were hitting apples with sticks.
My heart was punctured with an arrow. The bank was smashed by a giant potato with sour cream.
Mr. Bean lost his pants and walked on the surfboard. Ms. Pacman met Pacman and they got married.
The skirts started to talk while the pants called them big mouths.
The man bought leaves in a plastic factory. The number 8 was used as the girls glasses.
This year was the best year except that my heart was demolished with an arrow but I am still alive.
Gone Are My Blues and Gone Are My Tears Darius V.
Why does the world have to be blue. Why does its people must cry for every thing that the world gives them. Why?
Why can the world be good to us. Why can the light conquer the darkness.
Why do the children have to swim through tears that their fathers wept. Why are they blue, such a loneliness color.
Why can the world be fun and games. Why is it only serious matter that we must solve only to open it to an other problem we must solve.
Why can we have a button that says Gone are my blues and gone are my tears. Why can we just not be blue and stop crying.
Why must the world be so cruel to us. why does the world have to be blue lonesome and tearful. Why?
And That Is How I Remember Them Jason Z.
I went to the circus. I saw a clown. He was big and fat and had a big red nose. He fit in a small car the size of my shoe.
He went up on a tower the ringmaster said get down. So he started dancing then he started rapping then he fell it was a tragedy let's all have a moment of silence just joking.
Then he got down he gave the ringmaster a flower it got him wet then he said sorry to him he shook his hand it shocked him.
After he got in the car he ran over the ringmaster's foot then he crashed into a pole reversed and ran over the ringmaster's other foot.
Next he tried to jump into a bucket of water he made it in then he got out and said I got wet.
I loved the circus and that is how I remembered them.
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